Submission (#69997) Approved

Submitted
11 January 2025, 05:37:22 EST (1 week and 4 days ago)
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11 January 2025, 12:21:01 EST (1 week and 4 days ago) by Yves

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Hello! First of all i want to say thanks for the in depth review of my writing and wanted to apologize for any discomfort and inconvience i might have caused!
I was sure that I was only told not to use any ai assisted translation software so I picked the ones which should basically to word for word translation and thought that's the way I was asked to try! But I did not make any screenshots of the talk with yves so I might have memorized that wrong! I'm deeply sorry for the misunderstanding!
In the future I will only submit writing I wrote but since I'm not confident in my english skill I might stick with drawing ;_; Thank you again!!

For the third bulletpoint, I was sure I made it similar to the event stories from november, basically saying whats there but not describing. I did not mean to go over a line with that! I was so hyped with "ok so what can be a very traumatic event that could explains why zayne needs to heal now." and I think i went over the board with it. ;-; I archived the writing to not cause any harm with it! please feel free to fully delete that submission ;_;

I completly changed the story for zayne now. He basically stumbled across vampire-doings right before the happenings in november and got cought and brought into the ceiling. He is confused and a lil traumatized but no torture! It's basically a lair.

I am actively looking for a succubun owner with the vampiric trait who wants to be the maker but until then I only hinted a vampire shadow which could be anything and anyone!
It almost took me 6 hours of active drawing so I'm very proud! I haven't used any rulers or assets from csp thats why it's a bit more wonky than usual. (the straight lines)

Thank you for reading and your time!

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Art - 40 Carats

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MYO-7731: Zayne

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