Submission (#37571) Approved
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Submitted
31 January 2024, 17:23:35 EST (9 months and 3 weeks ago)
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31 January 2024, 17:28:28 EST (9 months and 3 weeks ago) by Yves
Comments
Was rejected because I gave too much detail to a background bun!
I changed the sentence:
"His gaze flickered to a muscular yet elegant masc-presenting doll, their long hair pulled into a stylishly messy bun as they stepped into the pool."
to
"His gaze flickered to a bun who's doll form was just his type as they stepped into the pool."
And changed nothing else. Hopefully its okay now? Thanks!
I changed the sentence:
"His gaze flickered to a muscular yet elegant masc-presenting doll, their long hair pulled into a stylishly messy bun as they stepped into the pool."
to
"His gaze flickered to a bun who's doll form was just his type as they stepped into the pool."
And changed nothing else. Hopefully its okay now? Thanks!
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Writing - 23
Additional 100 words:
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MYO-3735: Reverie (Ari)
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