Submission (#36916) Approved
User
Prompt
Submitted
28 January 2024, 17:01:36 EST (9 months and 3 weeks ago)
Processed
29 January 2024, 20:45:01 EST (9 months and 3 weeks ago) by Yves
Comments
Hi there!
My recent submission was rejected because it lacked details, specifically regarding how the mochis were made. In response, I've taken the initiative to create a short story around that delves into the process, and I've complemented it with the art I made and used it to decorate the text! ^v^/
The rejected submission: https://succubuns.com/submissions/view/36526
I wrote 808, so I've count only 500 words in the criterion options. I've not included Shibani in extra NPC reward 'cause I wrote few lines about (I think it isn't enough to count as NPC bonus). I've also count Dan's bonus 1 time too (only for the art).
Hopefully, everything is in order now, I think 👀
Hope you have a lovely day! 💖
My recent submission was rejected because it lacked details, specifically regarding how the mochis were made. In response, I've taken the initiative to create a short story around that delves into the process, and I've complemented it with the art I made and used it to decorate the text! ^v^/
The rejected submission: https://succubuns.com/submissions/view/36526
I wrote 808, so I've count only 500 words in the criterion options. I've not included Shibani in extra NPC reward 'cause I wrote few lines about (I think it isn't enough to count as NPC bonus). I've also count Dan's bonus 1 time too (only for the art).
Hopefully, everything is in order now, I think 👀
Hope you have a lovely day! 💖
Rewards
| Reward | Amount |
|---|---|
| Dan’s Recipe Book | 1 |
| Dango Stick | 1 |
| Rice Flour | 1 |
Skills
| Skill | Amount |
|---|
Stat & Level Rewards
User Rewards
No user rewards.Character Rewards
No character rewards.Criteria Rewards
Writing - 15 
Additional 100 words:
5
NPC/gift art bonus:
0
Owned Imp bonus:
0
Commissioned Writing:
Off
Collaboration:
Off
NPC trinket reward:
Off
Art - 24
Fullbody bun:
2
Halfbody/Chibi Dolls:
0
Fullbody Doll:
0
Simple background:
0
Complex Background:
0
NPC/gift art bonus:
1
Owned Imp bonus:
0
Shading bonus:
On
Commissioned art:
Off
Collaboration:
Off
NPC trinket reward:
Off
Characters
Shibani
| Reward | Amount |
|---|
Dan
| Reward | Amount |
|---|---|
| 0 EXP
0 Stat Point |
MYO-2798: Krysta
| Reward | Amount |
|---|---|
| 0 EXP
0 Stat Point |
Add-Ons
These items have been removed from the submitter's inventory and will be refunded if the request is rejected or consumed if it is approved.
| Item | Source | Notes | Quantity |
|---|
KanadeMori's Bank
| Currency | Quantity |
|---|