Submission (#1094) Approved
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21 January 2023, 21:04:11 EST (1 year and 10 months ago)
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21 January 2023, 22:20:20 EST (1 year and 10 months ago) by Yves
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i hope that with these edits its a bit clearer to read! i tried to add in details without changing the flow of the piece ;0;/
if you have comments on specific sections that are difficult to read or any section that would need more description, i would be open to hearing that as well — dialogue isn't my strongest suit so i wanted to try pushing myself to write more of it, my apologies for making it take up too much of the piece! ;;
if you have comments on specific sections that are difficult to read or any section that would need more description, i would be open to hearing that as well — dialogue isn't my strongest suit so i wanted to try pushing myself to write more of it, my apologies for making it take up too much of the piece! ;;
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Writing - 43 
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