That was pretty cool, I've enjoyed the story! Timothy has grown into one of my new favorite NPCs I think, so that's pretty neat.
SPOILERS CHAPTER 4: My only little issues were that despite the urgency, going there alone so quick was quite naive, and so was taking Timothy without a worry after they've seen that the vampire lord still had control.... I would've wished for just a little more backlash and reasoning to their choices to not deploy more help, like "we can't drag anyone into this" or "we don't know who to trust / trust timothy" etc. BUT! It did turn out to be a good move for them in the end, so hooray to them. And while the character design is great ok its own, i think more pointy & less round/square elements would highly serve the lord to look more evil.
The finally and the plot with the prisoner concluding was quite satisfying to read; I did also enjoy her character. Dove and Jackal were great as always, and Silver was also a great new addition to the team.
Overall, great work! 🖤♥️
2024-11-21 02:22:16
(Edited 2024-11-21 02:26:13)
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That was pretty cool, I've enjoyed the story! Timothy has grown into one of my new favorite NPCs I think, so that's pretty neat.
SPOILERS CHAPTER 4: My only little issues were that despite the urgency, going there alone so quick was quite naive, and so was taking Timothy without a worry after they've seen that the vampire lord still had control.... I would've wished for just a little more backlash and reasoning to their choices to not deploy more help, like "we can't drag anyone into this" or "we don't know who to trust / trust timothy" etc. BUT! It did turn out to be a good move for them in the end, so hooray to them. And while the character design is great ok its own, i think more pointy & less round/square elements would highly serve the lord to look more evil.
The finally and the plot with the prisoner concluding was quite satisfying to read; I did also enjoy her character. Dove and Jackal were great as always, and Silver was also a great new addition to the team.
Overall, great work! 🖤♥️
2024-11-21 02:22:16 (Edited 2024-11-21 02:26:13)
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