coursework is kicking my ass but I came to read a bunch of your Worldling (and Abettance!!) prompts at random :) This one and Walk to the Night Market ended up being my favorites! The dialogue flows so well here and I love how the two of them just immediately fall into this really natural rhythm as they gossip... "the audacity"... the audacity! I was on the edge of my seat truly! It also ended up being useful for me as a sort-of summary of what I assume was the event where cherubuns were revealed, because I wasn't here for that LMFAO
I think I already complimented your banter before, but Worldling's conversation with Abbettance in your other piece was really so fun. I'm always a bit worried about how much the (understandable) word count for prompts on here might limit my opportunities to dick around, but you have done a very good job laying the foundations of your character dynamics in a very short time. love the good-natured ribbing with all my heart. Anyway I have to go finish writing an essay now but I had fun. compliments to the chef
2024-11-20 16:16:58
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coursework is kicking my ass but I came to read a bunch of your Worldling (and Abettance!!) prompts at random :) This one and Walk to the Night Market ended up being my favorites! The dialogue flows so well here and I love how the two of them just immediately fall into this really natural rhythm as they gossip... "the audacity"... the audacity! I was on the edge of my seat truly! It also ended up being useful for me as a sort-of summary of what I assume was the event where cherubuns were revealed, because I wasn't here for that LMFAO
I think I already complimented your banter before, but Worldling's conversation with Abbettance in your other piece was really so fun. I'm always a bit worried about how much the (understandable) word count for prompts on here might limit my opportunities to dick around, but you have done a very good job laying the foundations of your character dynamics in a very short time. love the good-natured ribbing with all my heart. Anyway I have to go finish writing an essay now but I had fun. compliments to the chef
2024-11-20 16:16:58
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