[Gift] I Just Love Leo (More Than My Dad)
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By BonefydSkeleton
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Leo tries to write a passionate plea with the hopes that Percival might forgive Peter for stuffing s'mores ingredients in the bed again.... but Peter ran off before the poem could be read 😭
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I think about this poem really often. Like ever since you first shared it, but even more so seeing it conceptualized like this. This was always a winner in my heart. The way you placed all the torn off papers makes this flow so seamlessly. Your use of the colour coding with the words makes me stupidly happy, and even more so when I remember Leo technically wrote this and colour coded it, like yes, I happily accept this idea. He's that girl in highschool with the highlighters and coloured pens and all the cool stationery that's making her math notes look clean and aesthetically pleasing. .....And then at some point he fell off and they started looking like doctors notes something something gender perception but that's a tale for his debunnified self.
I can't stop laughing at Percy's super expressive mouth, he's so funny to me. His fucking teefies!!! PEAK percival feature. His bigass mustache also <3 kissing him on the mustache
I love the detail of Leo's gear as a blanket. You're a madlad for going through the details of colouring it, but know that I appreciate it immensely that you did. also the lunar rover lamp? OBSESSED. can we have that thang irl... I want it
Peter's cute face just completely brings this together. He KNOWS he did no wrong ultimately, good for him <3 I, for one, would kiss his head and tell him he did very good.... although Leo might mourn the chocolate stains he's gotta wash out of his own clothes later. eh, that thing has seen mud for days, this isn't too far off, he's got this
2024-10-29 19:48:50
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